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(@bentley)
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Not the most inspiring title! :p
I actually started these first 3 pages during Christmas, but didn't progress it much as such despite the fact I do have a fixed idea in my head. Mainly I'm totally caught up in my Dentistry course and bla bla bla... you know the drill. Wow... didn't intend that pun!

I only posted these pages on deviantart, and thought I should post some here perhaps? =)

The story is set out such that the context will eventually reveal itself- including the mystery girl character.

Well, here goes;

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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ZOMG!

Hello again you.

Anywhom, the comic. Tis snazzy, particularly the dialogue on Sonic's part, very impetuous, impatiant, almost like he is bored with the situation =D

The heavy shadowing on the second two pages sets the mood quite nicely, though not as well as the traditional "silouetes in the door" moment on page one.

All round, good work =D

 
(@cipher_strelok98)
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Wow really nice. I can't waitf for the rest.

 
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