Frequencies from
The cymaticist
Radiant manifested
New forms…
Harmonies from
The gods
Became discordant
Noise…
This poem can be read in two ways. Firstly, the traditional left-to-right way for every line (of course). Yet secondly, reading lines 1, 3, 5 and 7 in reverse and reading the others in the normal way so that the poem is read in a wave-like motion. Thus it is also:
From frequencies
The cymaticist
Manifested radiant
New forms...
From harmonies
The gods
Discordant became
Noise...
So the second method gives the poem and its characters slightly different meanings and descriptions.
Your poem is hard for mez to comprehend...
And, don't take this personally, but I prefer ryming poems.
And, don't take this personally, but I prefer ryming poems.
I don't take it personally.
I hate rhyming. So anything I write has a minimum of no rhyming and a maximum very little.
Awesome poem, Rishi.
Much obliged, Peaches!
Goodluck with the Poem Rishi. I myself hadn't written poems in a very long time now.
I prefer to write music, myself.
I myself want to get into Guitar Playing soon.
Eloquent in its concise form and interesting, regardless of which way you read it. Almost makes me want to try to write one of my own in that style just to see how/if I could do it. Have you written any more in this fashion? ^^
~Shadowed Spirit Sage
Eloquent in its concise form and interesting, regardless of which way you read it. Almost makes me want to try to write one of my own in that style just to see how/if I could do it. Have you written any more in this fashion? ^^
~Shadowed Spirit Sage
Thanks. And no, I haven't made other poems in this format... yet.
Actually, that's pretty awesome. Damned good job Squishmeister!
Actually, that's pretty awesome. Damned good job Squishmeister!
Much appreciated!
