Yes, I'm still working on "The Fallen Angel" don't worry, this was just a side-project to that. I got the idea of this from someone who decided to take on evil-doers when no one else would, but with a catch! He's ****ing insane and will rip to you to shreds if he gets the chance. So obviously, the content is a bit gory but I don't think its anything that can't be posted here. Still, I felt it couldn't hurt to put a gory warning in the title!

As the topic says, I want constructive criticism. This is a rough draft but feels complete to me (Obviously if you can see improvements tell me, I won't mind =P)
And on with that, onto the poem!
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In a place far from here
The likes you've never seen

Where the moon bleeds red
And inflects the blackened sky

There lives a man not far from there
They know him for the curse he bears

Scattering out and about throughout the night
He scouts for evil doers with his demonic might
Taking means to massacre them before they take flight
In the harshest of methods, almost as if he was a knight

Bodies and corpses lie everywhere, so grim that no one dare look
Cowards and bastards alike fear for what he will eventually take
His methods so precise, almost straight out of a book!

Identity never known, for none who has the misfortune
Of having a meeting with him has ever survived
If you ever meet, you might as well commit suicide!

His sword gleams crimson in the moonlight
And beheads with seemingly little effort
Cutting, dicing, and slicing unnecessarily so
Long after he's desecrated your precious corpse

He lacks a sheath, for he needs it not
Never will he stop even after you rot
Caressing his blade with maniacal laughter
A demon possessed, your blood stains his armor

So know, for the betterment of you and your comrades
Should you decide to ever commit a wrong doing
Whether major nor minor
Don't you ever step foot in here
Lest you tempt your very fate
With the Blood Knight