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(@tergonaut)
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Awesome.

Great battles, some of the actions are a little confusing to look through at first, but once one gets used to the left-to-right overall panel progression, it gets easier to sort out. And of course, these are some of the most intense battles that I've seen in or out of movies, cartoons, animes, etc.

Chao are such flexible creatures, it's surprising what a little work can make of them. Good job, you know I'm keeping up with this.

 
(@erika-the-ocelot)
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Poor Chrono!! ;;_;;

 
(@swifthom_1722585705)
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Absolutely fantastic

Who would of thought Chao could make a great comic.
The art is good, not brilliant but very good (especially as it's pencils, up ill now the only other crayon drawn comic I've ever read was Buzz's Philosiphy monkey) and wow, you have the storytelling aspect down to a pinch.

Keep going, it's great.

 
 Kaze
(@kaze)
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More pages! This comic is way cool!

 
(@chibibecca_1722585688)
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i'm liking how you tell what's going on more through the images then text. too many comics rely on very big speach bubbles to explain anything. ^^

 
(@rabid-rodent_1722027878)
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Awesome work, EE. The battles are excellently choreographed and are indeed quite intense, I love it. And those dramatic angles just add more to the flavor. Keep up the great work.

 
(@emerald-hedgehog)
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thanks for the support guys. It's really appreciated.

Here's the latest part of Chao! sorry if anyone is disappointed with this part. I didn't want to dwell on the arena for much longer as it has taken up a lot of time and story. I felt the story would drag so I decided to quickly get through it. Hope it hasn't spolit it. Also, as of now, I've decided to title each part to give it a more comic-like feel. :)
Anyway...

Our heroes are into the tournament. Chrono is feeling much better and they are ready to take the fight to the Dark Chao. But with connections all over the land, is the quest for the scroll pieces harder than they thought?

Enjoy the story and feedback (as always) is appreciated. :thumbsup

 
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