I'm sorry, I think you posted on the wrong board.

Here, I think this was the place you were looking for. Fchan.

And also, I coulda sworn you've posted images before, in maybe another two topics you've made?

Spiner, don't be so harsh. They're cartoon characters, they walk around naked all the time. There's nothing overtly sexual about any of these images except maybe, maybe the second one, but even then it's done tastefully enough to not push the board rating.

I'll leave your second complaint to someone more familiar with Carny I, but I can't see any other image topics by bw1979 on this page.

well, his last art topic was on page six. but BW, this does not excuse your strange habit of making a new topic for nearly everything.

as for the colouring.. it's fine and the colours are within the lines. but try experimenting a bit more. try to make the colour tone more consistant, addshading and highlights. the slightly scribbly flat colour tones do little to enhance the origional lineart and makes it more resemble something done in a hurry.

for example, red is not just red. where's the yellows, the oranges, the browns and even purples in sally's hair there? fur texture is a good thing to try and get if you're colouring with pencils.

go on, try and push the boat out a little and see what results you get.

Did you get permission from the artists to color their images and repost them here? Seriously, even if you give credit, people can be uptight about that kinda thing.

Um, sorry to say, but even as colourings, these are lacking.

Primarally as SH pointed, in credit to the line artist, you should always, ALWAYS do that with colours.

Second, crayons, which appears to be what you have used, require a LOT more attention to detail and working in then shown here. You need to use shades, not nessicarally through differant pencil crayons (Or wax, or oil pastels, whatever) but through how hard you press. everything in these pices is a scribble. Use different hues (like ChibiBecs said) and jus different pressures within them to get darker tones with those instruments.

And, something I think EVERYTHING here could use. Never be afraid to smudge things. Smudging with your fingers is a very simple technique, but it works.

Good luck.

You color better than me 2 years ago but ummm yea...good luck and follow the advice of the others...also try to color over it several times, that helps bring out the colors more.

there's nothing overtly sexual? Dude, did the third one even load, Nuch?

Bad colorings can cover up things...

Where's Harley when we need her?

~Tobe

Banned from The GHZ?

She been posting furry pr0nz again?

~Tobe

Hmmm...

Sally, Sonic, lineart by chadthecartoonnut, bright colors...Everything I like, bw1979. You have a winner on your hands. A little shading like chibibecca and Crimson Darkwolfe said and it'd be perfect.

"A little shading" would not make it even close to perfect. The coloring is mediocre. Are you a six-year-old using a coloring book, bw? I'm not very good at coloring myself, but I know that it involves more than just sloppily passing a crayon over a piece of paper while trying to stay in the lines.

Do what Chibi and Crimbo said. Define the colors more. Use different hues and shades to make details and texture stand out. Hell, maybe you could find a tutorial over at Penny Arcade's Artist's Corner to help you out.

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She been posting furry pr0nz again?

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I think so. I'm not sure, since most of her posts were deleted just to piss her off.

bwahahaha.

~Tobe

jman was so upset