Alright! I've finally gotten Siv off his lazy ass and completed this thing! First off, this is a SEQUEL. Yes, it sucks, yes, it's very hard to read, but please read this before continuing. PG-13, strong language and violence. Now
I am NOT WRITING THIS ALONE. Silver the Hedgehog and I are coauthoring together.
Now.
A few other things. PG13 for language and violence. And suggestiveness. This chapter is not incredibly detailed in surroundings. It's intentional. A few other things, critics of SX the character. Don't read too far into SX's activities in the ARK incident. He's not even scratched past a Kevlar'd bullet. It's intentional. He doesn't do much in this chapter anyway. You'll find CHapter 2 to be more in depth. I want no pointing as to his being "Too Powerful" in this chapter. Be more original in critique, thanks. I already know SX is Solid Snake with tails.
That has to be the longest first chapter of anything I've ever read!! @.@
It's still pretty good though. Nice, starting with the storyline from Sonic Adventure 2.
The reason it's a long chapter is because that was going to be all of the story.
By the time we decided to have another chapter, we had already planned this one out.
I didn't read it because it's in rtf format.
Why can you not use txt like the entire rest of the world? =(
You didn't read it because you hate me.
And if you didn't read it, why are you posting here?
Anyway Ch. 2 will be equal length or longer probably. And Siv, damnit, start thinking about Siv and Teal's roles in the chapter. Will Siv know about SX's plan? I can tell you Teal won't. And have I told you where SX and Shadow warped to?
