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Deadly Secrets: The Silver Files (Ch. 1 Release)

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(@sandygunfox)
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Alright! I've finally gotten Siv off his lazy ass and completed this thing! First off, this is a SEQUEL. Yes, it sucks, yes, it's very hard to read, but please read this before continuing. PG-13, strong language and violence. Now

I am NOT WRITING THIS ALONE. Silver the Hedgehog and I are coauthoring together.

Now.

Chaos Not Controlled

A few other things. PG13 for language and violence. And suggestiveness. This chapter is not incredibly detailed in surroundings. It's intentional. A few other things, critics of SX the character. Don't read too far into SX's activities in the ARK incident. He's not even scratched past a Kevlar'd bullet. It's intentional. He doesn't do much in this chapter anyway. You'll find CHapter 2 to be more in depth. I want no pointing as to his being "Too Powerful" in this chapter. Be more original in critique, thanks. I already know SX is Solid Snake with tails.

Review here, in iSex, or in FFN.

 
 Kaze
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That has to be the longest first chapter of anything I've ever read!! @.@

It's still pretty good though. Nice, starting with the storyline from Sonic Adventure 2.

 
(@silver-the-hedgehog)
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The reason it's a long chapter is because that was going to be all of the story.

By the time we decided to have another chapter, we had already planned this one out.

 
(@Anonymous)
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I didn't read it because it's in rtf format.

Why can you not use txt like the entire rest of the world? =(

 
(@sandygunfox)
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You didn't read it because you hate me.

And if you didn't read it, why are you posting here?

Anyway Ch. 2 will be equal length or longer probably. And Siv, damnit, start thinking about Siv and Teal's roles in the chapter. Will Siv know about SX's plan? I can tell you Teal won't. And have I told you where SX and Shadow warped to?

 
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