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(@jax-el-jefe)
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Whas good everybody, I'm working on an Evil Sonic story, that's well, a little more mature than the Evil Sonic that's in the Archie Comics.
"The Sound of Revenge" ((Also Chamillionaire's Album))
I'm still working on a story about how Evil Sonic is framed, since he is in Station Square, how about an assassination attempt...I guess that sounds good, I dont know, I just need some ideas..

The New Design
The new design for Evil Sonic, and some of his other Anti "homies((there will be betrayal))" is a lot different than Archie's...for one, ES doesn't have that stupid jacket and glasses, I mean this is 2005 who still wears that biker stuff? Anyways, here's a picture of my version of Evil Sonic:
www.teamartail.com/oekaki...s/9145.png

That's from TA's oekaki...as you can see, ES is more of a thug, rather than a punk rocker.

More to come, gimme some ideas...please.

 
(@deletedprofile-u_1722586485)
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hmmm... i hope you are not trying to copy my idea, (look at Shendu's Art request topic) but you seem to be using a alturnate Sonic, so i'll let you off, but ill keep my eyes on you so be careful.

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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Nice work, but it could prolly use some more colour...

Either way the new design is swish, very tough looking, though I'm empty o' ideas for ya right now = Maybe an anti-chaotix could be fun? As some kind of terrorist group? I don't know much 'bout ArchieSonic...

Good luck with your writing anywhom

 
(@ultra-devil-chao_1722585797)
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I like the old 20th century biker design, no mattter how outdated it is. What about an anti-Nack? He could be an officer paid to hunt down anti-Sonic...

 
(@chibibecca_1722585688)
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hmmm... i hope you are not trying to copy my idea


you're asking for people to draw for you, he's drawing his own inspired images. how is he copying you, other then both ideas being a dark/evil theme?

 
(@wonderbra)
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Your evil Sonic looks like something out of Dragon Ball Z, which does not bode well for your story.

 
(@jax-el-jefe)
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Your evil Sonic looks like something out of Dragon Ball Z, which does not bode well for your story.


?? how's it look like DBZ??

Eh, it might just be the drawing, I did do it on an oekaki after all, the penciled version looks a lot better than the one on here though, I'll have it up sometime..

 
(@rico-underwood)
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OMGIGGLE! You drew an evil version of a cannon character! You STOLED my idea!!!!oneone12rwarwarawr

Seriously though, nice job man. You'd think being an admin on the TA board I would actually LOOK at other sections of site. But I'm lazy.

Like the look man, has some good ideas in it. Good luck. :thumbsup

~Rico

 
(@jax-el-jefe)
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'Preciate the comment man, lol next time be more attentive, and about the DBZ comment ((again)) I'm assuming you mean the quills? I did that to make him look different from the other Sonic, so if they stand next to each other, you could tell who is who, with or without clothes.

 
(@deletedprofile-u_1722586485)
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Well I'm making a story called Evil Sonic. He making a Evil Sonic story only 18 days after I said I'm making a ES story. I'm did not put up a argument at the time and I allowed or did not protest about him doing his idea.

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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Of course, evil versions of main characters never EVER been done before, especially not since he appears to be basing his ideas off the cannon evil sonic...

 
(@rico-underwood)
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If you wanna get technical I think Sega can put up an argument about your story.

 
(@chibibecca_1722585688)
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even so, that doesn't give you the right to threaten him, shendu.

often people are inspired at the same time.
recently i noticed someone on deviantart who'd uploaded an image with the exact same theme as one of mine, on nearly the same day as i'd uploaded mine. i'd come across their image while on a random image hunt, and they couldn't have seen mine.

 
(@rico-underwood)
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OMGigglygoo! Becca stole that persons art!

~Rico

 
(@jax-el-jefe)
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Whoa...I had the ES story in the works for a while now, since like summer of '04, I just never had the time to sit down and work with it..anyways, here are pics of ES and others that will appear in the comic:


Inspired by Def Jam:Fight for NY
Date:Killa_Jax @ Thursday, November 4th 2004, 4:57 PM

Smoke the Fox((whom will appear in the comic)):

Date:Tuesday, November 2nd 2004, 6:46 PM

ES and 4 Snipers((scene will be seen, ha)):

Date:Wednesday, October 13th 2004, 9:08 PM

ES and Evil Tails((whom will be changed up)) don't mind the style, I was doing something different:

Date:Tuesday, October 12th 2004, 4:36 PM
ES: San Andreas

Date:Monday, October 25th 2004, 11:30 AM

Anyways, I think that pretty much settled that..

 
(@mike1204)
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I like your style. Keep it up. GOod luck on the story.

 
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