So I wrote Shades of Grey in 2001, and then 5 years later I got tired of it and started to rewrite it. So this is version two. If you read it in the past and enjoyed it, you might want to check this new rewrite out. I promise many errors/awkward bits were fixed! If you haven't read it, perhaps you could try if you feel daring and have some time on your hands. Being a worshiper of the Archie universe won't hurt either 
I would very much like everyone's opinion on this. Does it work, do you like it, what did you like, what didn't you like, etc. Please don't hold back. I value all of your comments. And I hope you get as much out of reading this as I did writing it 
Shades of Grey - Part 01 V2 @ Knuckles Haven
Shades of Grey - Part 02 V2 @ Knuckles Haven
Shades of Grey - Part 03 V2 @ Knuckles Haven
Shades of Grey - Part 04 V2 @ Personal Webpage (NEW)
The rest (version 1) can be found at Knuckles Haven.
This is an ongoing thing, hopefully culminating in a complete rewrite of everything i've written, and the conclusion to Black Noise in the end.
EDIT: Link to part two v2 added
EDIT: Link to part three v2 added. Don't step in the blood!
EDIT: Link to part four v2 added
Oh, Pundit, me like. Me like alot.
I love it how you portray Kragok, and it's not everyday you get to see someone doing great writing for the Dark Legion. Lien-Da's death came as a surprise though, but it's good, as it feeds Kragok's insanity. What's more, is that all the characters seem to be in-character as well, which is a big plus.
I also found it interesting as how you classed the Legionnaires with the ranking system.
Overall, t'was nice. Can't wait to read more of your re-written work, especially this.
Yay, more fanfics in CI! I like it, altough in my opinion the chapters/parts seem very shortlived. Maybe you should work on that.
I'm glad the both of you like it 
The ranking thing is something I came up with on the spur of the moment, hence its absence from anything and everything in V1.
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in my opinion the chapters/parts seem very shortlived
Mike, I hear that. In fact, I got a lot of that when I first released the fic in 2001. I was kind of aiming for a fast and pithy feel for the story, but i've tried to moderate this urge lately ;o
