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Ghosts of the Past: A Knuckles-centric fanfic

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(@nintendofreakgcn)
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Hey guys, I thought you might be interested in reading my new fanfic. It's Knuckles-centric, so if you don't like Knuckles, then you probably won't like this story. You can find the fanfic here:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2636991/1/

So, please read, enjoy and (hopefully) review. All comments are welcome. You can leave your comments either here or on fanfiction.net. Thanks in advance.

 
(@true-red_1722027886)
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You put the magic word ("Knuckles-centric" to be exact) in the title. ;p

I really liked it. The plot was nice & believable. Your language in describing scenes, characters, and actions were pretty good as well. ^_~

The only "problem" (which was minor) was the occassional missing of a word and that's something everyone deals with when writing something.

Great job as far as I'm concerned. 😀

 
(@nintendofreakgcn)
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Thanks for your comments, True Red. I find that when I'm writing Knuckles, the words just seem to flow a lot more easily than with other characters. So who knows, maybe you'll see more Knuckles-centric stuff from me?

In regards to the errors I made, I do proofread my work, but since I know what I'm trying to say, I sometimes don't see where there are errors. Such is life, I suppose.

 
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