Yush. Okay,... So I killed him. I much perfer that to him becoming a disembodied head. But yah. Here ya go. Let me know what you think.
It's an interesting premise, and the art is lovely 
I like the way you've managed to get the same consistent look that both characters have in the comic. Are you planning to take it any further?
<grammar nazi>You could possibly consider "Like i'd died" instead of "Like I would have died". Please forgive my anal-retentiveness.</nazi>
Thanks for the suggestion and I will keep any revision in mind. I have a third page that I'm hoping to color and post by today or tomorrow. So far that was the furthest that I had planned. Kind of a spur of the moment idea I had one weekend. So check back for any update. =D
I feel bad. I really was hoping to get the page up the same night as my last post, but photoshop died on me right when I hit the save button. But moving right along. I'm done with page 3. Sorry for the wait. I hope yall like it.
Oh you came back! With MOAR! *cheer*
Please make EVEN MOAR!
I do like it. There is a minor quibble I have with the panel in the top left, where it looks like Dimitri is missing his left thumb, but i'm sure it's something that can be fixed without too much trouble if you haven't been lazy with layers 
Eagerly anticipating the next page ;p
Hm,... might need some consideration on placement, but unless I change my mind, his thumb is hidden by Edmund's hand, and I'm still unsure if I'll make another page for this one at the moment. I'll toy with the idea in the future if I wish to make it more than just a three page short.
