(this is my first fic so give me a break.this is my tribute to the series i loved so much.)
ATLANTIC OCEAN 1996
riley was trapped.Water poured in the sides of the submarine.a flash of light envelaped him.
'aaaaarrrrrrgggghhh!!!he screamed.
as it came towards him.
WASHINGTON D.C FEDRAL BUILDING 1996
'what did you see?'asked mulder
the....ligh' light.....
'mulder he can't do it.'said scully
'he is the key scully i know it.'said mulder
(gotta go i will write more later.)
WOW.
Just... WOW.
You truly are the best Fanfic writer who has ever existed!
Words alone simply cannot describe how truly awe-inspiring your work is, and if you stop, the masses will clamor for your return.
Pray, do not let up, and giveth us the next chapter of this Odyssey for the ages posthaste!
(u r being sarcastic i do not get the joke)
'mulder'said scully'he is on the verge of conciusness'
'sculy i have got to find the key'said mulder
'its...the craft'wheezed riley
outside two figures walked into the federal building
'what craft riley?'asked mulder
two C.I.A agents entered the room.
'agent mulder?'said one and both fired
mulder fired back killing one
'scully!'shouted mulder as the bullet hit scully
Wonderbat was being sarcastic because he thinks your writing isn't very good at all. Here are some pointers.
One: Write it out in Word first (this will grant you checking tools).
Two: Spell check and grammar check (See above).
Three: Make your chapters LONGER. If it takes you several days to write a chapter that's at least 1000 words (I go for around 5000 on average in my stories), then so be it. Give the masses something MEATY when they read!
Aside from that, keep working and refining your skills.
Let them write the crapfic, Ultra. Mike and The Bots want to come out and play. ![:]](https://www.lighthead.net/misc/mofo/smilies/biggrinshaded.gif)
thank you for the absolutley brilliant encouragement. i will stop writing the fic now
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thank you for the absolutley brilliant encouragement. i will stop writing the fic now
And you felt the need to bump a dead topic just to tell us that you wouldn't be posting in the topic anymore.
Thanks for the heads up, Einstein.
