"""" lay low on your kari
comments, while you bury your friends comments, friends, dead ends,
bends, this is comin' to an end, kill, here double XL double XL
maybe jessi is right maybe I will go to hell, double XL double XL,
when I drop the bomb it isnt on my mom, but I will always remain hot, your not.
no
Am I seriously suppose to respond to this...I mean...I can't even...just....no words...
That's...only a few lines, man. That's not even a whole verse!
Write a whole verse or two or three next time. As for the content, I have no idea what you're talking about. :O Is it an excerpt from a battle rap? What's this about double XL? Are you speaking of XXL magazine?
Also, PLEASE avoid cliche rhymes (hot/not, friend/end)--be more creative! Rhyme longer words and have a more complex rhyme scheme!
