Wonderbat (9:12 pm): Dpes anyone know if this Shendu guy knows Chaosxshadow?
Gunstar Lucid (9:12 pm): y'know what i ahted? the sophitia challenges
Gunstar Lucid (9:13 pm): like having to win via ring out and the strong winds
Wonderbat (9:13 pm): Why?
Wonderbat (9:13 pm): http://p072.ezboard.com/fsonichqcommunitycarnivalislefanfictionfanprojects.showMessage?topicID=4101.topic
JohnBoyAdvance (9:13 pm): I dont mind those
Wonderbat (9:13 pm): ^Shendu thinks he's Chaos.
Gunstar Lucid (9:13 pm): thats like asking you why you hate the falling over levels o.o
Gunstar Lucid (9:14 pm): NO NOT ANOTHER ONE
Gunstar Lucid slams fist on desk which causes a tremor that makes the topic to fall into a crack in the ground
Wonderbat (9:14 pm): I think it's a parody. I hope...
Gunstar Lucid (9:14 pm): o.o @ TO fall
Gunstar Lucid (9:15 pm): its not
THS (9:15 pm): LOL TRUE RED KING

Looks like someone beat you to the punch.

Characters used without permission? Check.

Characters nowhere close to resembling themselves? Check.

Poor spelling, grammar, and plot explanation? Check.

I am the best king, by far. I'm not a transvestite, like that poncey "GOOD" King Katrice!

1)its my first fic
2)i was in a rush ill edit it later
3)if people dont want too be in it tell me otherwise ill use you.
4)why, do you think craig is not a king? your evil.

there will be longer chapters that will be understandable.

if you are good you can be in it, my pet.

Word of creative advice from a fellow writer: If you're in a rush, don't try to get what you've got written and posted. Instead, write it into Notepad and save it first, that way you can work on it at a leisurely pace and copy it across later. Just make sure you don't forget about it, tho.

I mean, I don't.

>>;;

I want to be removed, please. The Lackey can not be king. That would be a PARADOX!

Yeah, especially when he's telling Terg what to do.

Also, I've never heard the term Fanatic used in this context.

I don't really want to be used without my permission, either. If you're Cooki or Ultra or somebody who's known me for a fair amount of time, fine. If you're not, no thanks.

ok shadow hog you are out
Craig Bayfield you and Chaos xshadow swap

If you dont like the way i made you tell me and ill change it.

Chapter 1: the plot known

'Soon the dimensional transporter will be ready' Tergonaut said.
At True Reds Castle:
'they're up too something' True Red said. Well i'am going too find out, he thought. 'Ultra Sonic 007!''Sneak your way too the back of Chaos xshadow's castle and find out what they are doing'. 'Yes Sire' and he left. 'Dead man walking' True Red said under his breath.

Back of Chaos xshadow Castle:
'Ill have a look at though the window' Ultra thought. 'Whats that?!' 'Craig and Burmecian.s.d. you will leave to Mobius Prime immediatly' said Chaos xshadow. 'You will capture the Ultimate Life Form and bring back anything that might be of use'. Tergonaut held out a Gun and transported Craig and Burmecian. Ultra took a step back and before he could run, someone called out 'Hey You'! There stood Shendu having a murderous look on his face. 'Oh no' Ultra said.

(New chapter coming soon)

Burmecian and Craig are going to find more than the Ultimate Life Form... much more.

p.s. No Flames. Advice and feedback allowed. If you do not like where you are then tell me.

Removed. Removed.

Not moved removed, removed. Re.Moved. No longer placed within the odd story which somehow believes that MoFo is in any way connected to Mobius, removed from the oddness which has True Red as the King of the MoFo when she is a she, and removed from the oddness which makes my brain implode.

Plzktnxbi

okay. . . .

I love you as much as I love chaos, you make my brian giggle in ways that only cookies can otherwise achieve...Mmmmmm....cookies....

Ahahahahahahaaahaaaa!

sorry for this fic. a admin please close this topic.

Gotcha.