I am me......that is all
for the earths beating heart lay within. the stone of ages long sence past, but time is running out for all of earth and it's kin. the shadows have swallowed the earth,
and it's people live in fear. for the shadows crept over the mountin, man nor beast will win,
for in the ages past we all had ower sins.
and thoes sins are what will let break free from the shadows.
for the ray of light is but a shimmer without love and hope alone we can not win.
the shadows crept over the mountin the earths beating heart grows cold,
for the shadows have crept over the mountin the earths stone cold heart lay quiet within..."
I'm moving this to Carnival Island since it appears to be an original work and Carni I is the place for such things. You'll probably get a more productive response there as well since more creative-types post there who know about such things and so they're more likely to contribute criticism and their own works.
k...
Acknowledgement is nice and all, but posting just to say 'k...' is a bit wasteful. You've been warned before for meaningless spam and I'm not trying to suggest this is anything of the same magnitude, but - considering as well your oh so insightful '...' in the Acrio EVC topic - please try not to slip into old habits, 'k?
i have a haiku!
ahem.....
it is winter, it is cold,
so i buy a heater
fin.
wadda ya think?
Not a Haiku/10
the thing you must do
is make it five, seven, five
to be a haiku
Do a barrel roll
Press either R or Z twice
To deflect lasers
Unwanted advice
Peppy Hare is annoying
But Slippy's far worse
You're wrong, Wonderbat
It is "press Z or R twice"
Z and R were flipped
i shall brand it a poem instead of a haiku due to, um , no creativity and laziness, still its beautiful none the less.
