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Program 1-009 - A Soc Z. Fix Production- Apocalypse, Book One

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(@lwsrocks)
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My latest story, under the pen name Soc Z. Fix, Program 1-009. The story of the end of the world. Here is the prolog, tell me what you think:

The year is 2809.
The world is thriving.
There are no diseases, no problems.
Just a perfect world.

Humans and Robots live peacefully.
Genius robots gather data using the also thriving internet.
They use that data to predict the future.
And one day...

His face appeared on a huge screen at the center of the big city. His face was dead serious. It was EXE-5409, famous for the predictions he makes of the future. And now he was about to reveal his next one. "Ladies, gentlemen, and robots..." he started. "You have been gathered here today to witness my next prediction." he continued. "You guys, we don't have much time left." People's eyes got big. "The end of the world is soon to happen." Everyone gasped. "We have three months to prepare for survival. Then the catastrophy will begin."
"I see fire... I see death... I see massive quakes... I see the end of days." EXE-5409 was also known for being superdramatic, but we all knew that whatever he says was true. I KNEW, I had three months to prepare for the end of the world.

It's kinda small, but that's really the plot right there... What do you think?

 
(@Anonymous)
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Decent story.

 
(@silvershadow)
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If you're going to bump a topic in here, do so with some creative feedback please. Check the rules on content.

 
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