Ok all... i've kinda gotten bored of this one, but i have a new idea... Episonic.. or PiEsonic, idk, i think you can make your own, and all, but i need to start a new one.
Not bad, the technical parts are vastly improving, it's just....not funny. Perhaps it's a bit too random, in the sense that it made me say "what?" when I finished reading it. But, you guys are defiantly improving.
Yeah... that isn't what I wrote. I kinda liked my idea better :/ i mean, I think combat plots are good, but only when they make sense... Do you think maybe we could try to use my idea for the first one...?
Again, to be honest, it's kind of not the best, with them just... appearing. But i think i might have a funny idea, i'll send it to you.
Wait a sec. can you guys see my avatar correctly?
I just see Sonic.
That was my fault, my correct avatar should be up now.
D'oh! something's up with my avatar and it BROOOOKE!
Can someone help my out, my avatar broke...
I like number 2! It's pretty good. Hey, let me know when you need me to pen you some more scripts.
Ehh. K.
