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(@jetstreamx)
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Hello there people of Sonic HQ. I'm new here, so I will allow this as a chance to introduce myself XD. I am Jetstreamx(as you can tell by the user name ^^ ) Well, now that that's over with,...(I suck at self introductions I know) I would like to post some art in this place ^^ Tis a Comic series that I'm working on called Sonic Mech which takes place four years in the game's future. Therefore, Sonic is 19, Knux 20, Tails 12, Amy 16 and so on and so on. So yah, here are the links to the first few pages that I've gotten posted XD.

^^ Crits welcomed of course.

edit:I seem to be having difficulties with linking T_T
edit 2: Links working *points below*
www.deviantart.com/view/34779732/ Page 1
www.deviantart.com/view/34849022/ Page 2
www.deviantart.com/view/34895965/ Page 3

 
(@john-taylor_1722027898)
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Great stuff.
The only thing I dont like is Tails's chest hair. To much like Shadow's.
Other than that its good.

 
(@robobotnik)
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Great artwork, though I have to agree about Tails' chest fur, and his little flicks off his head too, but other than those you have a fantastic style!

I look forward to more. ^_^

 
(@jetstreamx)
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Yeah, Tails has had the most mixed reviews,... specifically in the terms of hair and no cuteness. I did know that when I changed his fur people would feel that it looked like shadows. More or less, I did this to signify that he's a growing fox boy. Thanks for the crits. Sorry if my tails bothers anyone :

Anyways, Page four is up and page five should be up tomorrow. So here you go.

www.deviantart.com/deviation/34921178/

btw: Checking out your DA page now XD

 
(@jetstreamx)
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New page up, page five. ^^

www.deviantart.com/deviation/34993171/

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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Looking very good so far, very clean work!

The lord of the boxered ones approves:thumbsup

 
(@jetstreamx)
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lol. Thanks my dear lord of the boxered ones. ^^

Now on to pages 6 and seven XD

www.deviantart.com/deviation/35032750/ Page 6
www.deviantart.com/deviation/35197604/ Page 7

 
 Pach
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Very nice. The only thing I could suggest is that with the last panel of Page 4, with Sonic just setting off, you could have had a load of speedlines protruding from the direction he was coming from to symbolise the sense of speed, as well as making it a bit more detailed, rather then looking a bit empty.

Other then that, nicely done.

 
(@the-buzzbomber_1722585708)
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Excellent stuff. I like the technical, tight line work you've got going on there. Similar to Uwekawa's official stuff but also of its own style. I agree with Pach that the last panel of page 4 would benefit from something in the background, but if you plan on colouring it then it probably wouldn't notice as much. I look forward to future pages!

 
(@hybrid-project-alpha)
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Tails is very pointy

 
(@jetstreamx)
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Sorry for the responses, or lack there of,... Page 4 was it. I remember I was going to add some speedlines,... I did what an artist shouldn't do and got lazy >_> Also,... my updates are going to be few, as you've noticed,... but I do have page 8. Sorry for not posting it sooner.

www.deviantart.com/view/35550289/

 
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