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(@starpawsgs)
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This is the anthro-manga I'm attempting to write. It takes place in 2011, 1 year before the apocalypse, and these mountain-sized robots are attacking everywhere. It may sound retarded the way I just put it, but let me explain....

The main antagonist, Professor Seto T. Defacto, is the reincarnation of a great alien conquerer from millennia long since past. This cosmic horror, Zsderx'ew (pronounced "stir-s-you") once had control over almost the entire universe, earth included. On earth, [he] had the robots mentioned above, called Relics, buried so that one day, if life ever were to exist on the planet, they would be summoned up from their 'sleep', one by one, to destroy anything and everything that lived. But before Zsderxew could program the Relics, [he] was betrayed and overthrown by [his] own subjects. Now Defacto must pick up where he left off in his past life, and activate the Relics.

The main hero in all this, Pocky, is a lion-raccoon mix, called a licoon. (I'm not the first person to think of that one.) He once used to be a normal raccoon, but was captured by a human mad-scientist. He was taken to an underground laboratory, where the mad scientist (later revealed to be Defacto himself) injected radioactive lion DNA into Pocky's veins. After his slow painful metamorphosis, the mad scientist was thrilled with his success. He had created the world's first living licoon, but lived to regret it. Pocky broke free and ran away, far away, and we know nothing else from then until now.

Then there's Todd the red panda (fox-raccoon. Real animal) whom I need help with on his history. Basically, Todd is the same as Tails, but with a bit more sanity and wields telepathy and clairvoyance instead of flying.

The other good guy (or girl, I should say) is Ishii the panthress. I've yet to attribute her with stats and history. But what I have come up with for her is this:- Ishii is smart, clever, and can fix just about anything. (Like Tails..... again. What can I say? I <3 the little guy ^^)

And I have the adversaries and enemies all figured out too. Xuria the wolf, Sira the fox mage, Kuon the tigress, Ryouju the chimera, Mekuta the British bear cub (fish and chips, mate!), and Jonoichi the squirrel. (Mekuta and Jonoichi later have a change of heart and join the team.)

I need a co-writer; someone who's good at translating ideas into legible words. If you're interested, gimme a holler!

P.S: I am usually not very well-spoken.

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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Sounds interesting, but may I point out before somebody else does, a Red Panda is not a fox/racoon hybrid. It's just it's own animal. Nn

 
(@shadow-hog_1722585725)
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I have a friend, Tansunn, over at EspioKaos's place that IS a fox/raccoon hybrid (figuratively speaking, at any rate), though. Whether that's worth mentioning or not, I have no idea.

 
(@starpawsgs)
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I am now looking for a co-writer for this story, someone who's good at translating ideas into legible words. Please help. If you are interested, PM me or just reply to this thread.

 
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