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So, fellas, as a redneck women churns out youngins, I just churned out another great idea for a webcomic.
Of course, this is a pilot episode so it might have some hitches and bumps but I still think it s amonumental step in modern art. Feel free to ask for a cameo or suggest hilarious escapades, just put a description or something. Something.
Annywaaays here it is mates:
Not bad, Geo. Your getting better. Only a few problems...
1. Rethink your plot. It seems to have a few holes.
2. Use a clearer font. I can't tell what the title of this work is.
3. Did you make those sprites yourself? They're much better than what you usually use. If they aren't yours, give credit.
But otherwise, nice job, Geo. You may be a promising artist yet!
