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(@poridet)
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The irony of it. A fanfic created by L M Delaney (A.K.A Poridet)

Disclaimer: Sonic the Hedgehog and Dr Ivo Robotnik do not belong to me they belong to SEGA.

This fanfic is a one shot. I watched satam the other day and I was thinking about creating a story about Robotnik (Julian in this story) having a taste of his own medicine. Sonic is in Robotniks position and Robotnik is in a captured freedom fighters position. Bear in mind that the characters ARE meant to be out of character. It's just like a role reversal.

In the episode "Blast to the past" it was revealed that Julian Kintobor is the real name of Ivo Robotnik.

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The irony of it. A fanfic by L.M delaney (A.K.A Poridet)

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"Bring him in" said the young yet sadistdic blue hedgehog.

2 mobians marched in a very obese man who was at least twice the height of his captors. He had a very unkempt brown ginger mustache, very cruel looking red irises with black surrounding them, a red jumpsuit with a yellow cape and rather small boots that looked oddly small compared to the rest of his body. He was also completely bald, and had a very cone shaped head.

"Julian Kintobor. You have been captured and are awaiting roboticisation for tresspassing on the grounds of my lovely city, Robotropolis. What do you have to say for yourself?" said the blue hedgehog. It was easy to describe Robotropolis as anything but "lovely" to the casual observer. Robotropolis was horribly polluted.

" Please! Not the roboticiser! I'll do anything but be turned into a souless robot! Anything!" exclaimed the over weight man.

"Anything eh?. More like you wanted to claim back this wonderfully polluted city for your own ends, you repulsive fat tub of lard! I'll see nothing of it!" shouted the hedgehog.

Julian blanched at the insult."No sir Sonic! I didn't want to claim back this city. I had to come here to retrieve some copper pins. I didn't mean to barge into your humble abode. Let me go and you'll never here from me again."

The blue hedgehog who was referred to as Sonic brought up his hand to his chin in a thoughtful gesture, he then said "and why did you want to get copper pins for, your ugliness?" Sonic had a horrid grin plastered on his muzzle, as if he looked forward to the answer.

"I'm not telling you! You are an evil little twit!" Shouted Julian. He was aware that he was toeing the line of being turned into a robot but didn't care. By the looks of it, he had already sensed his fate, there was no point begging to be let go.

Sonic's rage was building and he was about to explode. "An evil little twit am i? By the time i'm finished, you will wish you had never been born! My fellow mobians! take him to the roboticiser!"

The other mobians took Julian by the arms and lead him to the machine dubbed the roboticiser. Julian thrashed madly and was screaming insults. "My swatbots will avenge me! You haven't seen the last of what they can do!"

He was forced into the machine that would soon turn him into a being of metal and wires and the door was shut after him. As soon as he got in, a strange white coloured laser beam activated and started to lower itself to the bottom of the machine. Julian tried to duck under the beam and tried to evade it but it was futile, the machine continued it's terrible work. Julian could feel the top of his pointy head being transformed into metal. It was cold and agonizing as inch by inch his skin was fusing together into a sheet of metal.

Sonic was loving every moment of it. Seeing a human become a robot was his favourite pastime.

But the worst was yet to come. Even though his brain was turned into a computer, he would not lose sensation in his body until the whole process had finished. The odd laser circled around his thorax and Julian screamed as his Lungs and other internal organs became metal. It was certainly a painful process.

A few minutes later, Julian Kintobor (or bot 329 as he was now going to be referred to) stepped off of the platform inside the tube of the roboticiser. Sonic looked very happy with his decision. "Bot 329, you shall obey ME from now on. Is that clear?"

Julian, with his free will gone, simply answered monotonously in his mettallic voice. "Yes my lordship. Is there anything that i can do for you?"

Sonic looked ecstatic "Why yes my slave. You can work on my new destroyer robot! my fellow mobians, take this workerbot to factory 3a."

And so bot 329 (or Julian kintobor as he was previously named) was marched off to work as a laborer.

The end.
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That was the very first story i write. It was okay i guess. What did you think?

 
(@shoehedgie)
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I like it! It's a bit unsettling how Sonic is so evil. I think it adds to his character. Write more, I command thee!

Oh yeah, and a thorax is an insect body part. Maybe you were looking for the word "torso"?

 
(@burmecian-soldier-dan)
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Now theres a nice twist.I liked it.

 
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