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[UPDATE]Shadow's Magical Quest in Pretty-Colorland 2!!!

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(@erika-the-ocelot)
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This is a minicomic I've been working on, my original intent was to release it before the game came out, but that's not too bad.
A funny little story about Cream and Charmy who imagine what they'd do if they were Shadow. ^^
Enjoy!

TitlePage
MQ1Page1
MQ1Page2
MQ1Page3
MQ1Page4
MQ1Page5
MQ1Page6

UPDATE 26th April 2006

Yeah! I finally finished it! Coloring takes so loooooooooong...
I'm aware I messed up on Void's shoes, but when I noticed it was too late to fix. 🙁
If you notice any more errors tell me, any critique is good to me, I'll try to get better!

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MQ2Page1
MQ2Page2
MQ2Page3
MQ2Page4
MQ2Page5
MQ2Page6
MQ2Page7

And here's a little "preview" on the next issue:
Shadow Heroes: Magical Escape from the Mental Institute
Shadow Heroes
Sing it along the original! Most lines fit in well! XD

 
(@shadowed-spirit-sage)
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Adorable art, crazy-awesome concept, bright and happy colors, AND humiliating Shadow....

You, my friend, officially rock my socks. XD Excellent job!

~Shadowed Spirit Sage

 
(@craig-bayfield)
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Awww, that's darn adorable. The first panel alone made me all "AWWWWWW!!!"

I love you for this and give you 9 gold stars!

 
(@harley-quinn-hyenaholic)
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Oooh, Sonadow!

Ain't that cute?

I think Cream and Charmee have put Shadow off finding out his past for a while now...

 
(@questern)
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CYUTE!! I love the last page!! ^_^

 
 Kaze
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That comic was so KAWAII!! And poor Shadow... he's so confused...
The art was really great as well.
I give it a 5 out of 5!

 
(@tergonaut)
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See, THIS is the kind of Sonadow stuff we can put on a board like this!

Loved this. I definitely wasn't expecting the twist with Shadow's transformation, it was beautifully handled and well-done. I also liked how Cream came up with that part and then Charmy was all like, "Cool! I didn't know that happened," and then just continued on with the story.

Real cute. Wish we had some more of this kind of thing around!

 
(@erika-the-ocelot)
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I'm happy to see you all liked it! n_n
Do you think I should make a sequel? I still have a few nice ideas in mind I could use (*giggle*lumina*giggle*).=)

 
(@craig-bayfield)
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I'm all in favour of a sequel, especially if it uses little Ms. Under-referenced NiGHTS rip-off 🙂

 
 Kaze
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Don't forget the forgetten character Void!

 
(@ultra-devil-chao_1722585797)
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LOL, that made me crack up!

 
(@swifthom_1722585705)
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Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"
Sequel.... *drumb beats"

...

Lovely comic...

 
(@tergonaut)
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A sequel to something this cute would be righteous.

:hippie And yes I mean COWABUNGA!

 
(@mau-evig-the-queen-of-cats)
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:lol I was laughing my way through this whole comic. Very nicely done and cute concept. This is hilarious.
Shadow the girlhog! XD

 
(@sandygunfox)
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This made me laugh. For that I give you the Golden cup of coffee.

...It's a regular mug with gold spray paint, but still.

*hands* ^^

 
(@emerald-hedgehog)
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That was hilarious! :lol :lol :lol

I laughed so hard I cried! Sequel, sequel!
I loved the ending!

 
(@the-turtle-guy)
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Lookit, Shadow's hands are on backwards. XD See his thumbs? They should be on the other side of his head in that position.

 
(@crimson-darkwolfe)
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This made me giggle in all sorts of ways!

MORE! I DEMAND MORE!

 
(@tergonaut)
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TTG, notice Charmy's hand on the page where Shadow transforms. I noticed that too though in a way it doesn't detract from the overall message.

Hard to detract from something that hilarious though XP

 
(@the-turtle-guy)
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Yeah. Erica, even tho it isn't THAT big of a problem, I usually try the pose out on myself in a mirror or something before I draw, so I don't get hands backwards. Terg/s right, tho, people are probably laughing too hard to notice. :)

 
(@erika-the-ocelot)
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Thanks for pointing out the mistakes and the hint! It seems I'm getting hands wrong a lot recently! ^^' At least I haven't inked MQ2 yet, so I can double-check and see if everything's correct! n.n

 
(@cookirini)
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*giggle*

This comic....is priceless.

What else can I say? *goes to favorite it on DA*

 
(@shadowfax272)
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Really funny, I'm gunning for a sequel!

 
(@sonicocyborg)
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And now, on a complete side note...

www.deviantart.com/view/32410539/
Gotta love commissions.

 
(@erika-the-ocelot)
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Hey, I already linked to that! n.n
It's the cover page. =)

 
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