heres one RAP outta the book. lemme know what ya think..
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You best be actin~wise when I make like a witty riddler and strategize
like the thinking man statue pondering for soma the phatest~lines
Passin you up with flyin colors like Ive aced~the~finals
Your head bobs like ballons deflated when once Ive played~the~high~roll
Every direction your limited mind~perceives is left for the worms while your coldly dyin~deep
Announcin that every rhyme~intrigues smashin disputes for challengers only to ly~and~bleed
Shiftin brightly with aftershock like new alien invaders
And piercing hearts easily like the way ya wield a lightsaber
Forcin me to flip on ya like falling stacks of multiple dominos
Only drives me to pursue a target enraged proceeding with soma my growin hottest~flows
Makin it hard for you to duck or leap throughout all my deadly obstacles
I kno Ive got~this~bro, a hellspawn leapin out the dark corners givin ya a heart throbbin sneak~attack
Causin ya to flee from your skin with a safe stance of keepin~back
Aint no escape once your stuck~in my tight cluthes like a giant grindin bones from the ruckus
Since aLL your luck~is just diminished to dust~and makin ya hopless for absolutely nothin and Ima love~it
Relentless treatment like black holes never lettin you break~free
Your gone fallin deeper into the abyss never had a chance to dodge or evade~me
Im far much too crazy, hotter than the blue flames burnin all over the head of Hades
Take~heed, "everytime you look around" cuz it truely is your last day~see
No ifs, ands or maybes; not even praying are gonna help mess with your new fate~g
Fuckin with me is dumb providin you with a current death~wish~date
Life aint sweet for everyone, its me risin up on a hard earned strollin escalade
Proud with my head high like my soul enterin the holy path of the heavens~gates
Recognize the sickest skillz that rise so high that any thermometer alone shows off my freshest~blaze
What is this?
If they're lyrics, it'd be better if you spaced the lines out.
there^
Whatever they are, this is a PG-13 absolute maximum rated board (G/PG for preference). Tone your language down a bit, please.
*points to link to rules in her sig*
I suggest that you read those. We do take them seriously.
its a rap you guys I juss said it^ where the hell u from....?
Declaring it to be "a rap" doesn't mean you have a special situation where you can just post whatever you danged well feel like. Cut it out or face a warning.