What if Sonia the Hedgehog had been poisoned when she is captured by Sleet and Dingo during Sonic Underground?
This would look like:
Sleet and Dingo captured her in the race in Winner Fakes All after Sonia realized that Sleet is disguised as Sonic, then she is taken to Robotnik's base, Sleet and Dingo is planing to poison Sonia, they pretend that medicine is Autraosia, Sonia tasted it and then she realized that it is poison. So she died in Manic's arms, she told her brothers to continue their quest to find their mother without her.
Isn't this basically fanfiction?
Yeah, this basically does qualify as fanfiction, not to mention being totally depressing. Personally, I think Sonia was a good character, and I wouldn't mind some more interaction with the Zones in the comics so she could come back.
why would they poison her anyway?
it's like asking what would happen if any sonic universe character was hit by a lot of big pointy rocks. oo;
Ian: Here's the script for Sonic The Hedgehog #200.
Mike: 'Rocks Fall, Everyone Dies'
*cricket chirps*
Ian: Too much exposition?
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it's like asking what would happen if any sonic universe character was hit by a lot of big pointy rocks. oo;
"Ow! Pointy rocks! That's no good!"
I'm sure there a few characters everyone would wanna throw on pointy rocks. o.o
~Tobe
ooooh! I like Ian's idea 
hmm, strange idea to say the least. but i do remember that cartoon...how'd that series end by the way??? never got to see the end, i was around 10, and the ended up taking it off of tv in australia, then i lost track of it lol
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Isn't this basically fanfiction?
"Darkfic" is more like it. I'd like to know where SonicJordan2 was going with this idea. If all you want to do is depress the reader, that poisoning scenario would work out just fine, but it's not what I'd call storytelling.
Agreed. The old creed, like it or not, holds true, you need a beginning, middle and ending for a story, and you need to surprise or at least grip the reader. Not many read a story or fanfic that they know the precise outcome already.
The magenta colored hedgehog named Sonia gets captured by Sleet and Dingo.
Sonia: Let me out of here.
Sleet and Dingo: Come on, you're going to take medicine.
Sonia: No! I'm better! No!
Dingo: But you're sick! You have got to take medicine.
Sonia: Please, no! Please! (takes medicine that is actually poison)
Manic and Sonic rescue Sonia, but they find that Sonia is dying.
Sonia: That medicine is poison. Manic, Sonic, you guys continue your quest to find your mother without me, goodbye... (she dies)
Sonic and Manic are heartbroken because their sister died.
Manic: Goodbye, Sonia the Hedgehog.
Manic pulls off Sonia's medallion and he and Sonic leaves their dead sister behind. When they tell Bartleby the bad news, he is anguished.
Bartleby: Poisoned?! But that's impossible!
Queen Aleena sensed Sonia's death and tells the fellow Mobians.
Queen Aleena: The actions led to that event will no longer be tolerated since the death of my daughter. That bottle of poison must be destroyed.
I'm not even touching that one.
Damn that bottle of poison! 
SonicJordan2, that that you've written out is essentially some kind of fanfiction - in other words, it doesn't belong in here.
If you're wanting to post a fanfic or get ideas or feedback on one, then you should head on over to Carnival Island which I've linked there for your convenience.
Hope you enjoy your stay here.
~SilverShadow, Mobius Forum Moderator.
EDIT: Forgot to lock this. This has now been fixed.
