I just thought I'd make a thread where we can post our own poems. Sooooo......... here it is! Anyway, I'll start:
The Lotus Feet Of The Divine One
These uncountable worlds, though incomprehensible
Are yet no more than mere particles
Of dust
Scattered in several directions
They drift below my left Foot
All that is opulent, beautiful and majestic
Rolls underneath my Feet
And my Toes I do suck
So as to imbibe the intoxicatingly blissful nectar
Which is stored therein
'Tis ignorance that makes one forget
The Feet of my glorious form
'Tis knowledge that makes one remember
That all things, be they near or far
Little or large
Gross or subtle
Exist under the umbrella of my Lotus Feet.
Good job on the poem, it has a nice flow.
I was wondering, wouldn't this post fall under Carny Isle? All hail creativeness. I shall post mine when I finds 'em.
A Cuban Clock Named Thirukallai
Salutations to thee, foolish mortal!
I am a clock made of various alloys
Thirukallai is my name
Glorious Cuba is my motherland
All hail the splendour of our Communist regime!
Today I have climbed 27 pillars
Yet from each of these I fell
And that is how I lost my left foot!
