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(@dialga1)
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to join please fill out this form

name of chao

gender

personattly

what type of chao are you

heres my form

woody
boy
is always alone
baby chao

woody was just boarding the chao plane for a new adventrue and to make some new friends when woddy got inside he saw a waiting room a party room bathrooms kitchen pool hatchi ng for when your engaged with another chao woody went to the waiting room to wait for a friend (please join)

 
(@bile-demon)
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chao name: ben dover
personality: depressed
gender: male
age: 54

Ben being a depressed sort of fellow thought a trip abroad might just be a good idea. However whilst standing just outside the main entrance to the airport a car exploded :( *dies*

 
(@dialga1)
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but the car missed ans ben dover was safe

woddy still waited for a friend

 
(@silvershadow)
Posts: 1008
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Hi! Welcome to the Mobius Forum. It's good to see you felt like joining our community here and it's great you felt like starting an RP.

However, this RP seems to have little or no plot. The RP community here is a very plot-driven community indeed. Really you should take the time to read the RP Guidelines which are in a sticky thread at the top of this page, and heavily revise your idea before going further with it.

Also, it wouldn't hurt to make better use of your knowledge of basic English. Try using a spell checker, and remember that sentences start with capital letters and end with a period.

You might want to try looking over some of the other popular RPs here to get a good idea of what makes a good RP and what is to be avoided.

I'm going to lock this thread for now, as I think it'll encourage you to put more careful thought and consideration into what you post.

~SilverShadow, Mobius Forum Moderation Team.

 
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