lol this looks interesting! Welcome to the RP Guild smx

A little pointer on the RP, it looks like it could be an interesting story, but you may want to start by setting the scene and putting in a few details. Where are the characters starting from...Station Square, Knothole, the Great Forest...? Where in the story are we...has Amy already got the Emerald and gone super, or is it before that?

Just one or two paragraphs to let people know how to join the RP and where they can fit in^^

I'd love to join! I'll use my own charater Wraith.

Age: 21
Spiecies: Echidna
Gender: Male
Appearence: Similar to his brother Knuckles, although with maroon fur instead of red. has knuckledusters and dreadlocks same as Knux, and also wears a bronze colored Talainium breastplate, light and strong. Has a triangular metal implant on his forehead, same color as the armour.
History: Knuckles' older brother found in stasis on the Floating Island, he was woken by Knux and found he had no memory of his past, save for his name and his relitionship to Knux. He agreed to join the Freedom Fighters and now fights Robotnik alongside them. (Full History in the Character Profiles thread)
Abillities: Gliding, Climbing, Huge Strength and Quick Reactions.
Bio: More laid back than Knuckles, he is a bit of a practical joker at times, but he is serious when needed, and very loyal to his friends. Brave and fearless, maybe with a little bit of a short temper, but usually level headed and calm under pressure.

So yeah, smx, this looks like it has real potential! Just give us an opening scene so we know where and when to join, and it will hopefully take off!

Yeah, what Wraith began to say. You need a scene so that people can be able to slot their characters in and join, which you havent given any. By the way, the story/plot youve already given is really paper thin as it is. Why would the Chaos Emeralds attract Sonics attention? Why in the world did they make her transform into an super evil form? How did Sonic and co find out about it? You need to develop motivations here much more.

Your char seems way too overly powerful and practically a Sonic clone, but this time red. Hes way too powerful. He basically Sonic + Tails + Super Sonic which is ridiculous. What is his personality like? Why would he even be in this RP? He seems like a random character that so far hasnt got any motivation to be in it either, other then being ridiculously strong. Will that all be explained?

Weaknesses would be helpful as well, if only to balance the character.

Thanks guys this might clear things up first off this is an archieSU RP as for my character his history varys from version to version since this is a combanaition of archie and SU , he is Queen Aleea's agent helping sonic look for heras for his weak ness he always ging to hit some thing. as for the story Amy wants to be part of the action more and this takes place before the plot takes place

Riiiiiiight...what we really ment was an IC post, as in: "Sonic was in such a place with him and her, and he said this and she said this" kind of thing. The more detail you can give people to work with the better, because then it makes it easier for people to know how to bring in their characters. It can be tough to think of one I know, but once you get the basic setting down the rest comes on it's own I find^^

Quick question too...

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for his weak ness he always ging to hit some thing

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I'm guessing by that you mean he has a nasty temper? lol

If you're having trouble thinking of a scenario feel free to PM me and I'll try to help you work one out^^

for the weakness I ment he bumps into stuff alot but tha may be a better idea