OOC:Hi all, sorry its been so long, but Ive been busy. Anyways, this is the begining of my storyline for this board.
It was the year 4065. deep in the mountains of Europe existed a valley about the size of a continent. within this valley resided a light blue hedgehog and her friends. together, they fought to protect the valley from the evil Sorcerer Lord Tarkama Veganstroth. although they had failed in preventing his coupe over the kingdom within the valley known as Mavlow Kingdom, they had time and time again prevented him from conquering the rest of the valley. several small resistance groups had been set up around the valley, but the one that worried Tarkama the most was the group lead by his daughter, Tristina Mariee Veganstroth.
A Light Blue Hedgehog in a wheelchair zoomed through the forest. her brown eyes looked behind her to see two burly guards on hovercycles, which looked like Motorcycles without wheels and on metal platforms
"Okay hoverheads, lets see how you handle this!" Tiffany growled, dodging between trees. this took out two of the hovercrafts, but the third began firing lasers. one of the shots nicked her arm, causing Tiffany to flip her wheelchair. tumbling out of it, she gasped as the guard moved in for the kill.
OOC: *pops in* Um, hi. ^^ I hope I'm not bein' a little out of line saying this now...but um, maybe it would be good, Tiff, if you described the plot a little. You know, set the time or place. It would help muchos to anyone wanting to join, just so no major mistakes are made and people have a basic idea of where they're going.
I think you have an interesting intro, but add the rest in and it might be a hit. ^^ Again, if this seems a little...I dunno, late? then I apologize.)
