Hi! Welcome to the MoFo! You've got a great start, but you need to add a bit more detail, like what characters are allowed? Who are the Lycans and what is their motivation for attacking? A bit more about the setting might be good too. It's a wonderful start! It needs a bit more detail in order to work though. You can just put it in an edit of the current post. One other thing is to remember to use IC for In Character segments of a post, when you're playing your character. Use OOC for Out Of Character when you're not playing as your character. It could really take off, but a more detailed intro is needed. Great start though! This one sounds cool!

Yeah what Jet said! Another thing you need is RULES. You can't have a good RP without set rules. When everyone is straightened out considere me a player!

(ok, thanx for the tips, ill edit the post)
(anyone reading this rp, jus follow on from the first post)

OOC: "Evil" descent? I resemble that remark!

IC:

Standing in the main hall of the newly conquered fortress, Crimson snorted contemptiously as he brushed away a pile of dust that had previously been a vampire. The fight had been over far to quickly for his liking, a mere diversion, not nearly enough to satisfy his desires in destroying these parasites.

Fully human currently, he stood at six foot tall and powerfully built, his long red hair wild and untamed, shooting off in odd directions. Clothed in nothing but a kilt and a bracer on his left forearm, an X shaped scar on his chest was clearly visable. His entire body languace was just screaming that he wanted to be doing something, anything.

"Are you listing to me Crimson?" A burly looking lycan asked impatiently, obviously frustrated at the redhead's boredom.

"Aye. Go scout outside the fortress, make sure this place is ours, grab some squirrels for lunch." Crimson practically growled in return. He picked up his polearm, unusual really in that he even owned it, rather than relying on his own teeth and claws, but the wooden shaft was sharpened at one end, and there was an old religious symbol of the humans roughly carved into the hilt of the blade. Wrapped round it's handle was a trophy necklace of vampiric fangs, a hobby Crimson had picked up.

"If you find anything unusual, come tell the Alphas, don't do anything rash..."

"Whatever." He replied, stalking out of the room, walking digitigrade even on his bare human feet...

(IC of Ashram)

Ashram was late returning after getting his master safe, the place was completely ran over of Lycans 'I wont live to serve these barking dogs.' He was a on a Black horse arriving to the fortress with a black and red saddle. Ashram himself was about 6ft 8, with a medium to well built structure. On his back was a pair of swords and a quim. On the side of his horse was light brown bow.

'To fight and die, or to run and live?' he thought. Getting off his horse and lifting his bow, with silver tips, he started to pick off every Lycan in sight. 'Now they should know i am here, lets see how strong they are.'

Running out of arrows he withdrew his swords and started to slay lycans left and right, but there was soon too many. A clever lycan fitted his bow, and shot Ashrams leg. Ashram fell, still trying to fight, he was bounded quickly by the surrounding lycans, and sent inside. In all Ashram had killed around 50 lycans on his own.

(IC Daywalker)

All alone the Daywalker knew his best way to get out of the forest was to fly up over the trees so he could see the way more clearly. However the forest was very dense and tall, so this would seem impossible, he would have to find some sort of opening.

'I have heard rumours of this place, strange creatures never before seen, and if they have been seen, there have been no survivors.' So daywalker walked cautiously southwards through the forest.

However this peaceful walk was soon to be ruined as there was a rustling in some bushes not far from him. 'Show yourself! And I may spare your life.' Instantly a human straggler showed himself, covered in filth, he looks as if he has been here a while.

'Who are you' said daywalker, 'What are you doing here!' The human said nothing, 'Answer me, or I will quench my hunger on you' showing his fangs. Yet the human still said nothing. Daywalker did not want to risk killing this man in case he knew his way out of the forest, so daywalker gave him a human strength punch to the stomach, so as not to kill him, the human yelled but said not a word. So Daywalker then gave him a human strengthed kick to the groin, the human fell like a sack of potatoes.

He still remained quiet. So daywalker then, bit the human and started to slowly drain him of his blood, he then stopped, the human fell, still alive. 'If you do not speak then you are of no use to me alive, but better off dead Daywalker, about to take another bite to finish him off, until the human shouted, 'Stop, please, I will talk' 'Why didn't you answer me earlier you fool!' daywalker said. 'I had sworn an oath to never talk again until I found my wife; she has been lost in these woods for goin on 6 months now.' 'I admire your devotion human, but you must tell me how to get out of these woods, it is of major importance' 'that answer is easy, the direction you are going is the expected route, but you must go the way you would never think of going, as the forest has strange magic over it. To get out you must keep turning right at every oak.' The human said 'Nonsense id be goin in circles daywalker said. 'Exactly, the way you least would go.' 'Very well human, in return I will spare your life, I did not drain you of too much blood, you should be fine within the hour, but if you have led me astray, I swear to kill you.'

In saying that the daywalker jumped away southwards, searching for every oak. He kept turning right at every oak, until he was halted on an open field. A strange figure he had never seen before was there, 'no, this is only legend, it is.... not possible' Before him, was once described as a mystical god, only in legend, and never seen, 'Hydra! This must be what strange creature lives here'

The hydra was really simply, a multi headed dragon, (Greek myth) with the middle head being the most powerful, being around 50 times bigger than the 6ft 8 Daywalker. 'Maybe I can sneak round, I dont think it notices me how wrong he was. One of the hydras heads was closely watching him, and what one sees, so do the others. They all turned to daywalker, roaring immensely in his direction 'Damn, I suppose living for millennias would give you bad breath, but that would kill a human on the spot.

Around the hydra was bones upon bones, also there was one relatively fresh corpse, a woman 'the humans wife, what a waste the hydra smacked daywalker with his tail, and knocked him so hard into an oak tree that it fell. 'Unworthy god, let us see who is the more powerful' Daywalker said, he then retracted his wings ready to fly round the slow but extremely powerful hydra'

Daywalker started to quickly cut down all trees around him, with a sword left by his servant. Until around 100 trees at fallen in seconds. He threw the fallen trees at the hydras powerful head, but the others intercepted all of them, except one, one huge oak tree hit the middle head square in its mouth, and it started to choke, until the hydra fell. 'Ha, not even a god is a match for me, how pitiful'

Daywalker walking towards the hydras head, ready to start to hack of its head, arose violently and head butted him flying across the forest, daywalker was unable to stand up after such a blow. The Hydra walked over, and stood on daywalker to make sure he definitely couldnt move, and was ready to eat him.

(I have a wannabe? o.o

(as in kain from the legacy of kain series, wouldnt want to be a wannabe of you, jk )