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(@sonic90s)
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some person and his buddys are walking around the stone and some one touches it and then they are in a planet named mobius
now you and your buddys are in it and you have to help sonic stop robotnick from taking over mobius first make your role play person heres mine
name:johnn
new mobius name:shred the hedgehog
race:human
new race:hedgehog
ok we need at least 3 or 2 members to play but there can be more cuz we need members to be the main VG stars and members to be the fan made stars

 
 Pach
(@pach)
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alex the awesome beastly man had stepped into the portal too after being whisked away from the stone he was very surprised by where he was!!!

He was liek "wow this is wierd huh guys" as he looked at everyone else. He was qite scared. He thought he should make a new naem but hestiated.

 
(@the-eggpire)
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Then this one guy called the Glorious Hamilton decided that his life was too dull and that this adventure was going to be super fantatastic! Luckily he came through the portal armed with AK-47s and a huge box of gernades. Glorious Hamilton was in the military of course. Glrious Hamilton almost had a heart attack when he saw several animals walking upright and talking in plain ENGLISH!
"Holy crap where did we wind up at! This sure doesn't look like my base! Maybe me and my budies should have never tried to play with crazy rock that we just accidently stumbled upon on! Whatever happened I'm prepared for anything!"
CONTINUED IT IS TO BE

 
(@toby-underwood)
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OOC: Welcome to the RP Guild, where all the users strive to be as big of a smartass as me.

Regardless, couple of things to try to prevent replies like those in the future.

1. Spellcheck.
2. More thought into the plot and better description of said plot to the potential, yet small and cranky, reader base.
3. Sentence structure, needing is of improvement, think.

~Tobe

 
(@Anonymous)
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Acrio caressed the stone sensually. Everything was going according to plan. Everyone he had scoped out, attracted to the stone, fell victim to his kinky little game.

 
(@bentley)
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OOC: I was about to say... did everyone else decide to have a few pints before rping... without inviting me?
... I was going to take great offence at that!

Anyhow, don't mind me. Enjoy everyone, for what it's worth. :B

 
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