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(@codezx)
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Raen didn't respond, still pulling that metal piece. After a few steps, a small bit of blood was visible on the fur surrounding where he'd been hit. He made no notice of it, though.

 
(@violet-whirlwind)
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OOC: Ok...Starting just as Reni is being captured....May put Viv and Freedom in this too..even though Freedom is neither a hedgie nor a 'kidna...she's a fennec...

Anyway....

IC:

There was a disturbance near the front gate of the compound as a recently-captured slave faught her captors with all her strength. She broke free once, and bolted toward the gate at near 750 MPH. She didn't get very far, however, as the collar that had recently been clamped around her neck tightened painfully and she dropped to the ground, gasping for breath as it released.

Okay...THAT was a bad idea... Serenity thought as she watched with a mixture of fear and hate as the strange beings and their techdroids approached to restrain her. Just as they were about tho cover her in chains, a purple fist shot out and pegged the nearest Technian right on its nose. "You'll never...*gasp gasp* take me alive! NEVER!" She bellowed in their faces, baring her teeth and flattening her ears.

The creatures apparently didn't take the hint as they tried to forceably make her exchange the clothing she normally wore for the customary slave garb. Snarling, she sunk sharp teeth into the arm of the nearest technian, who cried out and sharply withdrew, at the same time backhanding her with it's other hand. She was promptly muzzled. Serenity soon found herself restrained by many techdroids, as other droids made the necessary wardrobe switch.

She was then taken to the torture room, where she was branded, and her back quills were shaved to bare the whole of her back to the whips, which soon flayed her back raw. She was left there, hanging about a foot from the ground by her wrists, with no food or water.

She was left like this for about half a day before being released and dragged off to the factory building, where she was harnessed to a large block of teknolia to be used in building the compound. Because of her resistance, she was forced to work through the night, still wearing the muzzle, after all the other slaves had gone to the sleeping compound.

TBC

OOC: Hope that was okay...will intro my other chars later. Surge might be in this as well.

 
(@mega-the-chao)
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OOC: I'll join. I'm sure that Mega fits in since he is a hedgehog. I'll have to post after school though.

 
(@amadeus-windfall)
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Name: Prisca Stone
Species: Echidna
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Fur color: Green
Eye color: Black where normal eyes are white, red the rest.
Clothing: Silver metal-ish cothing that covers her entire body, minus the hands, and black shoes.
Story: When the Teknians came to the planet, Prisca (Or Stone, as she's known to everyone) went to them, and offered them the location of the echidnas in exchange for her freedom. Since then, she has worked with them- first to catch people, and now to oversee the slaves.

Name: Roderick "Hot Rod" Myna
Species: Hedgehog
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Fur color: Red, with a flame-shaped yellow highlight on his head.
Eye color: Blue
Clothing: Slave clothes
Story: Quite impatient and hot-headed, Hot Rod was taken along with the other hedgehogs into the slave camps, where he is forced to work in the slave workshops. He has two spikes on each arm, on the outer side.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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OCC welcome Mega the Chao and Amadeus Windfall, Violet your post was okay, I liked the idea of the brand and about shaving the quills of the back of the Hedgehogs, do you mind if I use those ideas in my drawings Violet?, a note to Amadeus it is a great idea of your character Stone, this will become really interesting, another note in each cell there can be only two slaves and there arent any beds so you sleep on the floor of the cell.

Yanar and Raen where pushed into their Cell after they have finished eating their nutrition packs, the Tekdroid activated the barrier of the cell and walked away, Yanar sat on the floor laying his back against the wall of the cell completely exhausted from the hard work.
"Im glad that we can sleep our seven hours now" said Yanar while massaging his right ankle where he got branded the name of K.H yesterday and it still hurted a little, he was going to drink the rest of the water that remained in the glass from the nutrition pack but stoped and looked at Raen.
"here friend, you can drink the rest of the water if you want, you worked really hard today" said Yanar offering the glass.

 
(@codezx)
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"No, I'm used to it, mostly. My training helped me for that..." Raen said, putting his hand over where he was bleeding lightly. He put pressure on it, slowing the blood.

"I guess a bandage is out of the question..." he said, leaning against the wall.

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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OOC: Ok I'm here now. I was using one of my alts earlier. And I was just wondering if the hedgehogs keep the spikes on their head.

Name: Mega
Species: Hedgehog
Color: Red
Age: 13
Height: 4'9''
Appearance: He has rainbow colored eyes, a bluish grey muzzle, and a green gem embedded into his chest. Without the gem he dies. His clothes and back pack were taken so now he just wears a loin cloth.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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OCC: the Teknians only shave the quills from the back of the Hedgehog, so they keep the quills of their head and dont forget the Teknolia collar since your character has special abilities, and that you got branded the right ankle with K.Hs name, hope this helps you Mega.

Yanar nodded and drank the rest of the water, then the light brown Echidna layed down on the floor and curled up to keep some warm in his bruised and dirty body.
"Im going to sleep now" said Yanar tiredly and then heard someone (Serenity) was being hited by a Teknolia whip of a Tekdroid at the slave workshop.
"Is someone still working outside?, how cruel" said Yanar feeling sorry of the slave working outside and slowly fell asleep.

OCC: I think we are enough players so is closed to join now.

 
(@negasonic)
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Today was one of the toughest Mega had experienced. It was bad enough when his clothes were replaced with a loin cloth and a collar was clamped around his neck, but it got even worse when his back spike was shaved and he was branded. He had once attempted to use his powers, but every time he did he would feel a strong pain. He had spent the day carrying pieces of metal in the slave work shop and finally was going to get some sleep. "Why me?" he sighed just before falling asleep.

OOC: I would have posted more, but I have to go to school. And when I said back spike I meant a single one because he has SatAM style spikes. IE one row. I hope taht works for now.

 
(@codezx)
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Raen nodded.

"I hope they're okay after today." he said, before falling asleep himself as he sat against the wall. Even while he slept, he dreamed, and his fur stood on end.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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meanwhile K.H was walking around the corridor of the Tekdroid factory until he came across a female green Echidna.
"Hi Stone, are all the slaves in their cells?" K.H asked to his partner.

OCC: you can now look in my gallery at netraptor to see how K.H looks like, he is at the same stature of a Mobian so he is a dwarf compared at the normal size of the Teknians who are a bit taller than a human.

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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Mega eyed the others.Awesome! That girl tripped the teknidork. He walked over there and stared at the Teknian. "Hey don't take your anger out on Yanar, he didn't hurt you!" he said.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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Ignoring Mega the Teknian talked to Serenity.
"You are still rebellious slave?, I will tell K.H about your additude, he will really enjoy torturing you" said the Teknian walking away passing beside Yanar who was on his knees coughing still clutching his stomach with his right hand from the blow and suporting himself up with his other hand on the ground.

 
(@violet-whirlwind)
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IC:

"And I'll just fight HARDER, Chrome-butt. I'm not afraid of you. Yer just a bunch of big, armor-skinned bullies!" she shot back, earning herself more whippings from the tekdroid. She bared her teeth under the muzzle and spat at the retreating techdroid "Coward, retreating from me, hiding behind yer threats!"

TBC

OOC: She's just asking for trouble, now...:P

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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K.H was begining to hear some commotion at the slave workshop.
"Wait a bit Stone, I want to check what is happening" said the dwarf sized Teknian to Stone as he went where Serenity is, the Teknian that got triped walked to him.
"K.H that purple Hedgehog is really rebellious, you have to do something with her" said the Teknian.
"So is the purple Hedgehog who is causing that commotion, I will take care of this" said K.H glad about going to torture her and went where she is.
"I see that working for the night wasnt enough to you slave" said K.H to Serenity.

 
(@codezx)
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((OOC: might as well get Raen in trouble as well.))

Raen had stopped, and had been watching. This purple hedgehog had some guts.

"Perhaps because you lack the brain power to make it enough, Teknian. It's obvious that there's a lack of mind power between all of you. Any idiot should have been able to tell that this was far too large for any one person." He said, gesturing to the large piece of metal.

 
(@negasonic)
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Mega spun around and grinned. "Yeah Metal tush, you may have the strength, but you lack the mind." He then stuck out his tongue. He stared at KH wth his rainbow eyes and said. "Maybe if you were a little less cruel and didn't give out such huge metal pieces then people wouldn't hate you as much. They'd still hate you though." He was beginning to act so full of himself and didn't realize that he would probably be in BIIIIIG trouble for his comments.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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K.H stares at Raen, Mega and Yanar.
"I can see you have got friends now" said K.H to Serenity, then he noticed something on the upper left arm of Serenity, he took her left arm roughly to his face and looked at the rainbow birthmark.
"how is it that I didnt noticed this" said K.H surprised then he smiled cruelly about what he was going to do to her.
"take her to the torture room and those two slaves as well, they will get tortured for insulting me" said K.H to four Tekdroids slavedrivers pointing at Raen and Mega, the Tekdroids started to hit Serenity, Raen and Mega with their Teknolia whips and kick them in direction to the torture room, before he followed the Tekdroids slavedrivers K.H looked at Yanar.
"get back to work slave!" said K.H whipping Yanar across his back and followed the Tekdroids to the torture room, Yanar painfully standing up stared sadly at his friends and continued pulling his Teknolia piece.

OCC: hope you didnt mind that Yanar wasnt taken to the torture room, besides Im doing that so I dont leave the other characters hanging.

 
(@codezx)
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Raen got angry now. Ignoring the pain from the whip, he punched at a tekdroid, much harder than he'd normally swing at, say, anything else. It connected, launching the droid a good few meters.

"That feels much better." He said

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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The Tekdroid slavedriver landed on the ground nearly falling on two slaves, he sat up looking around confused trying to detect what happened, K.H was distracted at that moment making sure some slaves where doing their work and then heard the noisy landing of the Tekdroid slavedriver that got punched by Raen.
"Huh?" said K.H looking surprised at the Tekdroid slavedriver standing up while some Tekdroids slavedrivers came to see what happened and check if he got any damage, K.H continued following the three Tekdroids slavedrivers that continued kicking and hitting with their Teknolia whips at Serenity, Raen and Mega as they went to the torture room.

OCC: Im guessing Raen was covered with Serenity and Mega when Raen punched the Tekdroid slavedriver thats why the Three Tekdroids slavedrivers didnt saw what Raen did, just to explain.

 
(@negasonic)
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Mega looked to Raen and then spat at one of the tekdroids. He made a weird face and then did it again.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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They arrived to the torture room, the three Tekdroids slavedrivers proced to hang Raen and Mega about a foot from the ground by their wrists, just when they where going to tye the wrists of Serenity straight up K.H stoped them.
"dont hang her yet, grip her arms and legs then hold her still on the ground" said K.H to the Tekdroids slavedrivers while he took a Teknolia knife from the torture tools.
"I want a piece of your rainbow mark slave, so im going to remove a part of it from your skin" said K.H as he walked to Serenity.

 
(@violet-whirlwind)
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IC:

Serenity had been about to stomp on the foot of the nearest techdroid, her ears pinned back in fury at her captivity. However, when she saw K. H. approach with the knife and announce his plans, she forgot about pestering the droid and started struggling madly to get away from the advancing Technian. Her eyes grew wide with fear as he approached, the knife in his hand.

She struggled backward, trying to curl. "No! Please! Not my Mark! Please!" She placed a hand over the birthmark protectively as the technian continued to advance. "Please! not that! Please!" She could see that he enjoyed hearing her desparate pleas as he continued to come closer. She tried desparately to curl up and protect herself...

TBC

OOC: Still waiting for the perfect oportunity to intro my other chars...they WILL be in this...I just haven't had the right cercumstances to intro them yet...Not anyone's fault, really, just wanted to say I hadn't forgotten them. :D

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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When K.H saw that the three Tekdroids slavedrivers held Serenity still even that she still struggled a little he got near, holding a firm grip at her left arm he started cutting the bit of skin he is going to remove of her arm enjoying her suffering, when he cutted the area he is going to remove he scraped the skin with the Teknolia knife so it started to separate from the flesh, he removed the piece of skin with part of the rainbow mark from her arm and placed it on a small tray.
"dont worry slave, I will take good care of it" said K.H to Serenity.

OCC: Violet just so you know K.H just removed a bit of her mark so the wound its not so big but it still ruined her rainbow mark and will leave a ugly scar.

 
(@violet-whirlwind)
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OOC: Perfectly fine. :thumbsup Heck, far worse HAS been done to it before in other RP's....;)

IC:

"Noooo...." Serenity moaned, staring in horror at the patch of skin as it was carried off. She looked down at the now-mangled Mark, watching in horror at it bled freely. She continued to stare in horrified stupifaction at the wound, paying no attention to the droids as they hung her up alongside the other two slaves. "Nooooooo....My Mark..." She moaned again, acting broken.

Deep inside, however, this latest transgression only fed her desire to fight back. However, she now knew, open rebellion wouldn't work. She pondered what she would do next to resist. Sabatage...I WILL have my revenge for this...

TBC

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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Mega growled. "You morons shouldn't be so harsh!" He made and angry expression adn said. "Even if you torture me I shall nit become scared and weak like the others so HAH!" He was getting a little to full of him self and wasn't paying attention to the Tekdroids.

 
(@codezx)
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Raen's eyes had a slightly more red tint to them than normal. He continued to suppress his anger, but after as long as he'd been here, it was getting harder and harder. If things continued as they were going, he'd snap sooner or later.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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"silence slave!" said K.H to Mega and then looked at the three Tekdroids slavedrivers.
"you can torture them now, I will torture the purple Hedgehog" said K.H to the Tekdroids slavedrivers, the three Tekdroids slavedrivers started to whip the backs of Raen and Mega, K.H looked at Serenity.
"now I will continue with your torture" said K.H and started to whip her back.

Yanar was pulling his Teknolia piece untill he noticed Stone was nearby, Yanar couldnt believe that Stone could betray all of them and sold to the Teknians in echange of her freedom.

OCC: Amadeus I havent forgoten you.

 
(@rico-underwood)
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OOC: No... don't, just don't. I think you know what I'm refering to Alex. I saw it after I replied and decided to test my theory... Six times. DO NOT do that anymore unless it falls off the page, this is your "friendly" warning. o.-

 
(@codezx)
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Raen's fur spiked when the whipping started, but he made no other reaction to it. Each time he was sit, he felt something inside strain just a little more.

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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OOC: Hey guys, I'm gonna be gone for three days. I just thought I'd let you know.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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After two minutes K.H looked at the Tekdroids slavedrivers torturing Raen and Mega.
"you can stop now" said K.H and the Tekdroids slavedrivers stoped torturing the two slaves while K.H continued whipping Serenity for another minute.

 
(@codezx)
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Raen managed to keep himself calm, even after the whipping stopped. Nothing seemed even remotely different about him, save the marks on his body from the whip.

 
(@violet-whirlwind)
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IC:

Throughout her torture, Serenity had stayed stubbornly silent, biting her lip to keep from crying out. I will NOT give them the satisfaction of hearing me scream... She thought to herself as her already torn up back was ripped apart even more by the whipping.

TBC

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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After another minute K.H stoped whiping Serenity.
"now we can take the slaves back to work, the strange Hedgehog (Mega) will now work pulling Teknolia pieces" said K.H while untying the wrists of Serenity and held her arm.
"Okay K.H" said the three Tekdroids slavedrivers untying the wrists of Raen and Mega, then they proceded to take them back to the slave workshop, K.H followed them dragging Serenity by her arm until they reached to the Teknolia piece and harnessed her to it.
"Now get back to work" said K.H to Serenity and lashed her one time with his Teknolia whip before leaving and continue checking that the slaves do their work.

OCC: Im planing of using another character as a slave apart from Yanar is it okay to you?.

 
(@codezx)
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Raen simply went with the droids. He cracked his knuckles, ready to work.

"Chaos devour you all..." he said, which was barely hearable, even to someone right next to him.

((OOC: I don't mind.))

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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OCC: Thanks CodeZX

name:Mari-An
specie:Echidna
age:16
sex:female
fur color:red
eye color:yellow
clothing:since she is a slave now, her clothes and shoes have been taken from her and only given a brown ragged strapless top and a brown ragged loincloth to wear like the rest of the slaves

The Tekdroid slavedriver dragging Mega looked at a female red Echidna pulling a Teknolia piece.
"Atention slave" said the Tekdroid as he lashed at the red Echidna, Mari-An flinched from the pain and turned to the Tekdroid slavedriver.
"I have a name you know" said Mari-An and got again whipped.
"Silence, slaves are only called by the whip not by their names, that is what K.H says" said the Tekdroid slavedriver in front of the sweating red Echidna.

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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Mega was enraged at the Tekdroid. "Leave her alone! What did she ever do to you?" He looked to the echidna. "Just ignore them. You DO deserve to be called by your name."

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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Mari-An looked at Mega defending her and then talked to the Tekdroid slavedriver so he dont get beaten.
"So what do you want?" said Mari-An to the Tekdroid slavedriver.
"You will now carry Teknolia pieces, he will replace you" said the Tekdroid dragging Mega forward.
"But he is for young for this work" said Mari-An looking at Mega with worry and simpaty.
"For insulting K.H he will now pull Teknolia pieces, so start working slaves" said the Tekdroid slavedriver and leaved them.
Mari-An started to carry a Teknolia piece and got near Mega.
"Thanks for defending me, that was very nice and brave of you, my name is Mari-An" said Mari-An gratefully and presenting herself.

 
(@alex-the-teknian)
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OCC: Important anouncement fellow roleplayers CodeZX, Violet Whirlwind, Amadeus Windfall and MegaSonic.
Im thinking of reposting my escape role play but dont worry in my first post I will put all the posts you put in the first page then we will proced of rebuilding the missing posts so I can post the rest of the posts of the pages that managed to keep safe and then continue playing, another thing this time I decided that is time to make my own furry character instead of using official characters like Yanar so I will change the posts with the name of my character instead of Yanar in my reposted escape role play but still I will use Mari-An, I will do the reposting when you all have answered me and the name of my escape role play will be the Teknians slave workshop (Sonic escape survival) just so you know.

your friend Alex the Teknian

 
(@megasonic_1722585791)
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OOC: Thank goodness. I was getting kind of worried about this RP.

 
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