BLACKFOX

Sat Jun 10, 2000 10:34am

Okay I need you lot to help me out here I need some mor Ideas for my comic Script I'll put what I have for part 13 so far so you get the Idea of the plot at the moment but the ADI and Yoll go back in time and save evry one from Robotnik, so all who die in the part will come back in the follw up part

well here you go enjoy. SCORLL DOWN
BLACKFOX
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PART 13
WHAT DANGERS AWAIT OUR YOUNG HEROES, WHAT HAS ROBOTNIK GOT SET TO TRY AND TAKE OVER THE ONCE PEACEFUL WORLD OF MOBIUS.

(Sonic, Mobius Springheart, Mimic and ADI are just about to start their morning patrol when the notice that the palm trees that surround Knothole are dying)
"ADI what's happening?" asks Sonic
"it looks like the start of a bad Future" ADI replies
"ADI look at your time stone" says Mimic
"what dose it mean when it shows red like that ADI?" asks Mobius Springheart
"that means that the true path of time is being change I only hope it can be stooped before it's to late for us all" says ADI with a worried look and voice
"as do I" says a voice that sounds very much like Yoll
"Master Yoll but... but.. well your dead, and where are you talking from?" says ADI
"in this time I may be dead but not in the past young Padawan not in the past." says Yoll as he appears from a porthole of time
"Master! am I glad to see you what's happened? asks ADI
"some how Robotnik has got hold of or a peace of a Time Stone"
"it's more likely to be a time stone Master" ADI replies
"err, ADI this may be a bad time to say this but... my peace of time stone has gone" says Sonic
"YOU WHAT!!!!!!!!! that's it we're doomed" says Mimic
"no we're not, watch and learn" says ADI (Yoll and ADI put their peace's of time stone together and summon Sonic part of the stone out of the porthole)
"it left as Yoll entered this time frame Sonic, because remember that Yoll was the original keeper of that peace of the time stone" says ADI
"Yo listern up heres the story. In what now is the Past, Sonic has found Dr. Robotnik's Robot Transporter device and it was sent back from this time frame and it must be stopped" says Yoll
"and how are we ment to do that if he's already change the path of time?" says Springheart
"right, from the time frame I'm from ADI is still to young to help so I came here to this time frame where she is a fully fledged time-traveller, and Since no one can set the future, there are two different possibilities, a future where the Little Planet and Mobius are free of Robotnik's control, or a future where Dr. Robotnik has been allowed to run amok!"
"Master Yoll Sonic is my Padawan in this time but he's yet to learn how to time trivial" says ADI
"for you then Sonic, there are Time Warp signs, marked Past and Future that are scattered around each Zone. When you hit one of these signs and make it spin, you will hear it sing the words Past or Future at this point it's time to really pick up the pace! When you start moving fast enough, you'll see bright stars trailing in your wake. If you can keep up your speed for a few seconds, the Time Warp will blaze into effect! and send you throw time. Be careful. Sudden changes of speed, slowing down will cancel the Time Warp. You can try for a Time Warp again just as long as your time stone glows yellow if not you most look for the sign that you need. but be warned. if you should be harmed while you are in the 1st stage of the Warp it will cost you your life!" says Yoll
"are you sure you want to do this Sonic?" asks ADI
"ADI you know I have got do this, and if any thing happens to me you and Springheart are the only hope for the freedom fighters" says Sonic
"your talking as if you are already dead" says Mimic
"err, ADI I think you should look at Knothole" says Springheart
"get down" shouts Yoll as a large squad of swat-bots open fire on them (Springheart stands up and opens fire on the swat-bots with his new Mini-gun only to take a sever hit to the chest from one of the swat-bots lazer gided blasters.) "Springheart, Nooooooooooooooooo" (ADI runs over to him) "Springheart talk to me! where did you get hit. Springheart"
"ADI........ you...... must.... go... back....... y...y....you.... are....o...our ...o...o....only... hope.... err....ughrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr" says Springheart as he dyes
"Springheart, Springheart. NO......." cries ADI
"come on ADI, we must go" says Mimic
"all the things that mean every thing to me have gone" says ADI with the look of revenge in her tearful eyes
"the passage of Time has been change" says Yoll
"and we can change it back, so lets go already" says Sonic.